Screenshot / Asia theme and castle

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  In:Cities Offline

  Lovely! I really enjoy this.

   

  Although the tall white/grey tower seems to be a little undersupported near the top. Maybe consider adding some central structure on the open floor with windows. Maybe a staircase of sorts?

   

  Love the water ride though. Very peaceful

  posted 4 years ago

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  Xtreme97 Offline

  The theming to the right is really nice (you're missing a roof though )

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  Coaster-GEOFF Offline

  The theming to the right is really nice (you're missing a roof though )
  

  Oh my ! Thanks for sharing!

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  Airtime Offline

  This has got a good old school vibe. Reminds of parks I first started look at years ago.

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  nin Offline

  I think I dug this more before the palette, but cool nonetheless. I like the added use of the WW scenery.

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  MK98 Offline

  I still don't dig the horizontal poles on the tower. They're so forced. You could add more depth to it by using things like shutters, flower boxes or crown mouldings.

  Other than that it looks like a decent screen. Keep it going! I'm seeing you as a very potential player.

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  Jappy Offline

  My remark would be the golden tip I give out to everyone: the breath of life! Add some signs, benches, lights, trash cans.... Signs that people are present.

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  Coaster-GEOFF Offline

  
  

  I still don't dig the horizontal poles on the tower. They're so forced. You could add more depth to it by using things like shutters, flower boxes or crown mouldings.

  Other than that it looks like a decent screen. Keep it going! I'm seeing you as a very potential player.

  
  I know, haven't forget that! just did not yet find the right replacements... Could try some shutters. Did not do that yet.. 
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  My remark would be the golden tip I give out to everyone: the breath of life! Add some signs, benches, lights, trash cans.... Signs that people are present.

  I think I should have to go for a more obvious bench then, because it's packed with tem . But I get your point and will work on it, thanks!

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  Milo Offline

  haha yeah I think the bench color is the problem because I didn't see them until it was brought up.  

   

  It's a little flat but that's very common for early projects,  mine included.  I don't bring it up to change now but just something to keep in mind for your next one.

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  alex Offline

  Cool stuff Geoff. I think the white tower doesn't quite fit with the rest stylistically.

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