Screenshot / Jaguar
- 15-March 22
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Jaguar is a roller coaster that sends its passengers on an exciting expedition through the jungle. The area is themed after an archeological dig in a Mayan temple, and the attraction itself offers its riders the feeling of a cat stalking its prey.
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I am honored
Dark_Horse Offline
https://ibb.co/nPgDWT3
Better quality screen.
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RWE Offline
I remember this. You really improved it with all the feedback on discord. Keep going!
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alex Offline
It's a decent enough start just keep going with it! I do think you could do more to sell the theme tho, I'm not really getting Mayan temple from this. Do you have a reference image of what you're trying to create?
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nin Offline
Definitely an improvement over your previous work, but I think you should finish the area more before posting for more feedback (and should result in better ratings). Filling it out with more content and finesse will give us a better idea of what you're after, and will help you get a clearer picture as well.
This could be as simple as more foliage to fill the grass/negative space (unless the openness is intended), or as far as more archy, path details and/or theming.