Park / Portmeirion Village
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01-July 04
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The actual garden, or lawn looks rather messy. If you are going to do a lawn, make it mostly grass so everything can be mowed and have the odd tree or two. Right now, there are large shrubs scattered all over the place, and it really ruins the feel of the screen.
The coaster colours seem a little too contrasting as well, but it's not anything serious that distracts the eye.
Edit: The jungle shrubs really don't fit in. Consider removing them.
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I agree.
BchillerR
The latest screens are really bad imo. The suspended's colour hurts, and the buildings look like they're made out of lego. Sorry, but I don't like it.
You are arrogant, condescending and irrespective.
Get off your self-appointed pedestal and maybe people will lighten up a bit.
other than that.... this park is most definatly a park u need to see finished and in whole. I think that the flow and overall feel/veiw of this park is what is going to show that it is made by the masters.
Screen 1: I like what you're doing with color. The only real thing that sticks out for me is the dark brown.. the whole section is living with bright pastels and then there's... brown, right in the middle.
Screen 2: My favorite. Looks like rwadams.. very realistic and I love the landscape.
Screen 3: I left you my comments at rct2.com, but the only real thing that sticks out is the boat.. looks like a Fischer Price toy.
But the last two screens are really.. disappointing. Using "Classic Mama Bear" as an excuse is a crock, IMO, because I was never a fan of her work. The vines look really bad all over the place.. the scenery is random - some of it cartoony. It just looks very amateur. A lot of basic things are missing. Change the tarmac under paths, the bright red of the coaster sticks out, landscaping needs to be scattered a bit more, no custom supports on the coaster.. etc. Maybe there's something else there that I don't see.. but personally, it doesn't work.
If finishing parks had any revelance to the conversation, I might be willing to discuss.
Nice try.
The rest looks good though.
We've already discussed going with the duller red to give it more of a ruined look to it.
BchillerR