Screenshot / TBA Jungle Area - Jim City Amusement Park


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  • Jappy%s's Photo

    WOOOW!! Nothing but love and praise!

  • RCTER2%s's Photo

    So good!

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo
    Holy shit this is good.
  • Steve%s's Photo
    Architecture is pretty solid but the atmosphere isn't there for me. I think this could benefit from some different path; doesn't seem too jungly. Keep some of the red brick but lose the other stone path and try a dirt path. Also, more lush foliage!

    Great work.

    Oh and try and give your raft and coaster stations a bit more character. They're technically good and very clean but I feel like they're missing something.
  • Recurious%s's Photo

    Reminds me a bit of a combination of Disney Earth and Extinction. Looks very good!

  • Liampie%s's Photo
    I really like the theming on the left and along the river, with the building arching over the river and such. Just a shame the buildings on the right side of the screen are generic, cliche super boring metal roof fests. You can do better than that! And I agree with Steve on the foliage too.

    Good screen.
  • inthemanual%s's Photo

    The station building is great, i really like it a lot. I'd think the grill building could use a bit of work though, it seems to match the station too much, and I think it's missing a chimney.

  • JimmyLaessig%s's Photo

    thanks for all your input guys! A chimney would probably solve most of the smoke issues in the restaurant.. no wonder no one is dining there....
    I'm at least gonna revisit the roof.. I already changed the path textures to a more dirty look, added some more foliage, etc

  • nin%s's Photo
    The cluster of buildings center-left with the boat and bridge is great. Best thing in the screen. I'll agree with Steve in saying that the atmosphere isn't quite there yet. It feels too... Main Street-like. Like a Main Street area but with jungle buildings. It's too planned and lacks an organic look and feel. Maybe more trees and rubble and overgrowth?
  • bigshootergill%s's Photo

    I would simply be repeating what others have already said, they've given you some great ideas to improve. It's great to see some new Jimmy work though, keep it comin'!

  • G Force%s's Photo

    Its all well made but just doesn't feel organic in terms of layout.  Might be all the right angles and such but maybe implement more diagonals or even curves into your path.  You could probably clean up the bridge over the river boat ride as well, some clipping objects there.  Good to see some full scale work form you, I'm definitely interested in this project thus far.

  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    I'd echo much of the above comments. I would perhaps also suggest restricting the light-brown steel roof to just the coaster station. I think it looks good there, but is trivialised by the smaller building with exactly the same roof texture and colour. It detracts from the main building. Maybe try wooden roofs?


    Excellent work overall, just the cena path doesn't fit at all with the jungle vibe that much of the architecture is portraying.

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    Tired of walking around and standing your foot into your stomach... Enjoy a relaxing ride on 'Steamboat Jimmys Swamp Tours'. Explore the wonders of the of the hot and exotic continent, witness the thrilling ride of 'Praying Mantis' from an exicitng new perspective, all with a cool breeze of air flowing through your hair... Or simply enjoy a freshly prepared burger at the 'Colonial Grill' restaurant.

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