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01-May 17
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Astroland @ Asbury Park
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Looks really clean. I'd like to see a little more landscaping to take this to the next level.
Oh, and don't forget some stairs on that MCBR catwalk.
The following turns look way too big for the height of the MCBR imo.
Agree with Trav.
Please add more supports to the station roof.
The transfer track is fucked, but everything else is pretty great. Nice flow!
Best stuff i've seen from you yet, foliage could have some more love, add stairs to the MCBR and some more technical details to the station and it's very good in my opinion!
This is definitely an improvement but I think the station needs some room to breathe. it is a little to cramped for the room that it has. I would say keep the core idea of the structure but make it a bit wider.
How would that trans...
nevermind.
The supports on your turns are angled the wrong way, they should face into the turn. The station feels a bit too plain, I feel like everything above the tracks could be redone. You forgot stairs to the MCBR. I'm not a fan of how the high fence at the bottom left just ends into a shorter fence, it creates a weak spot where guests could easily scale the fence. I like the brick texture you're using for paths, though, it's a lot better than the tarmac you usually use.
somebody has looked at starpointe's backstage
Technically not bad, but incredibly boring.
I personally don't mind if it's boring for the moment, it's nice because you're improving and you deserve encouragements. This look like a training project, everything is starting to look solid and as a semi-realist builder I don't care about the transfer track. I agree that for your next works you should probably go for something crazier.
Good job : ) !