Screenshot / Kingdom of the Moon - Moonlight River and Hotel

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  posted 6 years ago

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  hpg Offline

  Maybe try to be a little more selective with the placement and types of foliage. At the moment it feels just a touch random.
  
  Imagine you’re the groundskeeper in a real park and think about what areas could be kept neatly trimmed and what would be left to grow more wild.
  
  I’d go a bit more manicured closer to the main pathway where things are more accessible—especially if that’s part of the entrance. Then a little more overgrown closer to the water’s edge and maybe on some of the steeper terrain.
  
  A little more foliage at the base of those larger buildings could go a long way too.

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  RCThibo Offline

  This actually looks sick, major improvement from your first park! I'd put some kind of fence between the path and the water though.

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  In:Cities Offline

  Great advice by hpg ^^  

   

  I'd also recommend to look up some reference images of hotels/parks and try to recreate the foliage. I understand you might not want it to look too neat and fancy, but giving it some structure might help a bit. Also some thick patches of trees would help a lot as well.

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  Jene Offline

  Thanks for the advice guys. This helps me a lot. I´ve added more bushes and trees and stuff and tried a lot of different mixes. I hope this is an improvement.

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  posted 6 years ago

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  In:Cities Offline

  Definitely looks much better already!  It still can't hurt to have a couple of thick patches of foliage where the large trees are really close together. I'd try to mix in a few more of those darker green trees close to eachother to give the area some more contrast.

   

  Nice work!

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  olddtfan51 Offline

  Its looking good so far.

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  Foliage + refined near the path because of the waterfalls, because it seems the main path, around then foliage + aggressive/wild is ok
  I really liked the building and details

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